Anasia
Number of posts : 2
Main Class : Florida.
Registration date : 2007-10-25
 |  Subject: Hurt.  Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:41 pm | |
| Drip. Drip. Drop. Spatter. Spatter. She sits alone, arms folded over bent knees, veridian eyes streaming with pale blue tears.
As she sits in the ever continuous drizzle by the lone, abandoned, overflowing river, she gently twirls a floating lotus, crimson bright.
All my fault. I couldve stopped this mess. Why didn't I say anything?
She silently turns her head towards the forest; burnt, cold, and unwelcome.
The lonesome breeze brushes her bright blond mane over her hurt face, concealing her pain, her misery.
As she thinks, he thoughts remain drifting back towards her painful past, bringing more icy tears. (( Feel free to critique. Only the beginning of a story, most likely to be continued. :] ))
Last edited by on Fri Oct 26, 2007 9:08 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Lady Akhamanassar
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Number of posts : 80
Age : 49
Main Class : Warlock
Registration date : 2007-08-12
Character sheet
Full Name: Iseluna Amadeth Myrt'Rilynntlarn-Dawnstrike
Level:
    (70/70)
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| | Subject: Re: Hurt. Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:08 pm | |
| woot I likes it =D, keep it up girly! | |
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Anasia
Number of posts : 2
Main Class : Florida.
Registration date : 2007-10-25
| | Subject: Re: Hurt. Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:29 pm | |
| :] Thanks. I might have a bit more of it later on today. | |
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Alenziana
Number of posts : 7
Age : 32
Registration date : 2007-10-03
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Full Name:
Level:
(70/70)
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| | Subject: Re: Hurt. Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:08 pm | |
| That is so wonderful! Keep it coming! I know I'll enjoy it! | |
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